tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4385206523544127105.post649931144087865352..comments2023-05-25T23:21:31.805+09:00Comments on mentalie: fresh meatmentaliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10389745690489521170noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4385206523544127105.post-57274348016709330312010-05-23T20:19:37.275+09:002010-05-23T20:19:37.275+09:00Oh man, I urge you to continue this piece. Please!...Oh man, I urge you to continue this piece. Please!Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09469564318863746009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4385206523544127105.post-56718978795304195452010-04-27T21:11:44.862+09:002010-04-27T21:11:44.862+09:00that was visual. and olfactory. :)that was visual. and olfactory. :)Jandyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17196460532320443618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4385206523544127105.post-47196834725244231952010-04-26T04:13:09.675+09:002010-04-26T04:13:09.675+09:00Nostalgic?
How about something from the 'Cit...Nostalgic? <br /><br />How about something from the 'City of Djinns' :)<br /><br />This was delightful reading, as always!Sangfroidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04086399793434646067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4385206523544127105.post-28317701603703737312010-04-26T04:11:28.633+09:002010-04-26T04:11:28.633+09:00(the city had no memories to haunt her that day.)
...(the city had no memories to haunt her that day.)<br />- loneliness a start?<br />Or<br />- Cosmopolitan Life a start?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4385206523544127105.post-70277033723748727042010-04-26T01:43:34.689+09:002010-04-26T01:43:34.689+09:00@choco, slamming into a fishwife's bosom is a ...@choco, slamming into a fishwife's bosom is a haunting experience as many a mumbaikar will confirm ;) i have no idea if there is more to this story as of now...!<br /><br />@soin, i like so much that you feel sorry for places too. what about objects? did your mother soothe the floor when you fell down like mine?<br /><br />@blunt, yessir, i shall try my best to comply.<br /><br />@eve, thank you. perhaps something will :)mentaliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10389745690489521170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4385206523544127105.post-31151291830632954842010-04-25T19:36:24.156+09:002010-04-25T19:36:24.156+09:00I'm with Choco. That's a scary-ass image y...I'm with Choco. That's a scary-ass image you're leaving us with. <br />I hope something within you will force you to continue forward with the story. That was totally awesome.Evelinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03937012521199990453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4385206523544127105.post-90533648422732618492010-04-25T19:28:37.586+09:002010-04-25T19:28:37.586+09:00that's so mysterious...let's have some mor...that's so mysterious...let's have some more!Blunt Edgeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08555022660539210810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4385206523544127105.post-82905457728454611052010-04-25T13:49:51.274+09:002010-04-25T13:49:51.274+09:00if bombay became mumbai what about trombay? it fee...if bombay became mumbai what about trombay? it feels left out.poor thingSoinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05708544526844237025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4385206523544127105.post-62552448190719566292010-04-25T08:43:50.839+09:002010-04-25T08:43:50.839+09:00"she slammed straight into a fishwife’s warm,...<i>"she slammed straight into a fishwife’s warm, moist, reeking bosom"</i><br /><br />Ummm...That line is going to haunt my weird head today...We will get to read more about her in Mumbai...right? :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com