Sunday, January 17, 2010

oh, the way we kissed!














down by the bridge
that day they bombed our trains the third time in a row
you and i, we kissed
and we kissed
and we kissed
until the police came to demand their just compensation
for so shamelessly endangering the morals of this town
when they left
you turned to me and said,
god…
i love you
i can’t breathe
kiss me quick!

20 comments:

Scattered Thoughts... said...

Pardon my ignorance but tag 60 means?

Scattered Thoughts... said...

oops.. I meant 69

Eveline said...

I have a hangover after reading this post. Fucking fabulous. I want to hang out with you very much. i think it would be totally fun.

The Cloudcutter said...

Left me breathless and dying to be kissed!
See? This is what I was talking about - you have IT.

Sangfroid said...

Ahem!
So the white noise is between the pic and all the kissing :-D

Besides, I'm trying to decipher the pic. Did it happen on some terrace :-P

blunt edges said...

now that was hot!

mentalie said...

@scattered, 69 is the number of words in this piece.

@eveline, thank you, and i'm sure i'd have a blast hanging with you :) until our paths cross real time, my friend...!

@cc, thank you...but the kisser's gone :(

@sangfroid, the white noise is the soundtrack to my life! the picture is a dock in mumbai.

@blunt, ahem...yes :)

The Cloudcutter said...

I know :-( why is there never a kisser when you really need one?

Meghana Naidu said...

oh lord above

!

i <3 it

agent green glass said...

ooooooh. kiss me quick.

Flickering Cursor said...

That was... articulate. "Just compensation". There's a wiki entry for that now: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Baksheesh.

mentalie said...

@cc, perhaps we are just very picky.

@AGG, *gasp* my kisses are the property of colonel khan!

@FC, just got back after getting my house lease registered and parting with a wad of baksheesh..%$#@%!

Juggler said...

Ah! I had to make a phone call and demand a kiss :D

mentalie said...
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mentalie said...

@juggler, i hope it was wonderful your telephone kiss ;)

Atrisa said...

Puckering up in India? Chee chee.

mentalie said...

@atrisa, i tell you, the cops were utterly repulsed as well ;)

Kro said...

HYPOTHETICALLY
would it be inappropriate to say that this post had me packin wood?
HYPOTHETICALLY

mentalie said...

@kro, hypothetically, no :)

R said...

Seems worth it, after all.

last word by the acp

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